編輯/偕詩敏
在撰寫雅思論文中，為了讓你的文章看起來更有邏輯，結論其實是很重要的。要如何起頭，並將你的論點表達出來呢？Jade在《engVid》中介紹了兩種流暢的結尾寫法，讓你成功拿高分。
1. 客觀的敘述
以下有三個邏輯性的寫法，從As I have discussed，However, I…到Moral / Social observation，依序寫下來，讓你更能加強你的論點。
As I have discussed 正如我說過的
As I have discussed, there are some advantages and disadvantages to the question.
“正如我說過的，這個問題的答案可能有好有壞。”
However, I… 然而，我認為….
However, I think parents should be responsible for teaching their children to be good members of society.
“然而，我認為父母應該負責教育他們的孩子，使他們成為社會中優秀的成員。”
Moral / Social observation 就一般 / 社會
If children are taught to be good members of society, the world will be a better place.”如果讓小孩成為社會中的好榜樣，這世界會變得更美好。”
整個結尾就會變成：
As I have discussed, there are some advantages and disadvantages to the question. However, I think parents should be responsible for teaching their children to be good members of society. If children are taught to be good members of society, the world will be a better place.
“正如我說過的，這個問題的答案可能有好有壞。然而，我認為父母應該負責教育他們的孩子，使他們成為社會中優秀的成員。如果讓小孩成為社會中的好榜樣，這世界會變得更美好。”
2. 主觀的敘述
第一句就要寫重點，這是西方文章的精神。所以從I think / I believe寫出你的論點，The most important reason強調原因，到Moral / Social observation，照著順序寫下去，會讓你的文章更整齊。
I think / I believe 我認為…
I think parents should teach their children to be good members of society.”我認為家長應教育孩子，讓他們在社會上成為好的人。”
The most important reason 最重要的原因是…
The most important reason is because parents can share their life experiences.”因為最重要的原因，就是父母能與孩子分享自身經驗。”
Moral / Social observation 以社會的角度撰寫
If the schools were to teach, the role of family would be destroyed.
“如果只由學校教導的話，家庭扮演的角色會被破壞。”
這裡的were，要和後面的would搭配；就像第一點的are和will搭配。
所以結合起來就是：
I think parents should teach their children to be good members of society. The most important reason is because parents can share their life experiences. If the schools were to teach, the role of family would be destroyed.
“我認為家長應教育孩子，讓他們在社會上成為好的人。因為最重要的原因，就是父母能與孩子分享自身經驗。如果只由學校教導的話，家庭扮演的角色會被破壞。”
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